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Catchy, moody and relatable. Love it. Also love the style you chose for the video.

I'm confused, is this a shot you made for The Guava Juice Show? The animation is great but giving no context other than "Superheroine Wedgie" makes it a bit strange.

tiketsu1 responds:

No I didn’t make it,I found out about it through a forum page and simply cut this small bit out of the full video. I just posted it here to make it easier to find. But if that was wrong for me to do i will remove the video.

I assume you speak spanish, so I will as well. If not, let me know xD

¡Qué bueno es esto! Me encantó, ¿De dónde eres?
Me pareció que los diseños, la música, la ambientación y la animación estaban todos donde debían estar. La cámara tenía sentido y la historia es excelente. Me pregunto si esto es parte de un mundo de fantasía que has desarrollado y sólo estamos viendo una parte.
Felicidades, gran trabajo.

Hi there!
I like the premise, and I understand this is a pitch that you want to work into something bigger. I didn't particularly like some of the designs, though, and a few jokes need better delivery, but other than that you did a great job! Hope to see more in the future!
-Ject.

Interesting.

Everything was very nice, especially for Newgrounds standards. Great job!

Btw, this was not Flash, was it? Looks like Toonboom line quality.

Hm.

Hm. Yeah, it looks like one and a half days work. Slightly funny, yes, but I didn't quite like it.
I wont say anything about animation, you already said it was made in a really short time. The joke was good, unexpected... well developed, i guess, but not that good.

7/10
3/5

Well....

It's nice.
Leaving the animation on the side, the joke was very predictable. All of the small gags within the story were funny, but predictable as well.

"Nothing too new or interesting", but "not bad, I like it".

3/5
6/10

Excelente

Ya te lo había dicho, y me alegra sobremanera que lo hayas subido. Se ve tu progreso en animación en todo momento: es inclusive mejor que el video original.

Muchas felicidades!

Shi-Gu responds:

Jajaja, gracias, aunque como pensé la gente en newgrounds no disfruta tanto estas cosas como en DA :/

...nah

Ok, let's talk about this slowly.
I've been a big fan of your work since Maxwell's Silver Hammer and I've loved every single animation you've made. But this... this isn't funny. Just the part where that fat sonic guy falls made me giggle, but that's all.
It is a good idea for a series, but it isn't well put. I mean... well, you know, it was boring. The animation was awesome, as always; voice acting needed a bit more of emotion, but was good as well; humor sucks. Seriously, not good.
But I'm sure you'll get over this. People learn from their errors and stuff, you know what they say.
I'm looking forward to the next episode, because I think this can improve, really.
Good luck,
Ject

3/5
6/10

Bravo.

Has mejorado bastante. Me gustó mucho todo... aunque diste a notar tu flojera al poner esas pantallas negras de "tanto tiempo después"... ah, y el final está muy soso. Pero en cuanto a animación y todo eso has mejorado un chingo. FELICIDADES.

9/10
5/5

Shi-Gu responds:

Muchas gracias, en verdad si he mejorado mucho, pero si la verdad, el final lo tuve que apurar mucho, se suponía que habría una escena de entrega de regalos con un "slideshow" algo así, pero como el tiempo me ganó tuve que apurarlo todo, pero la verdad, toda la última escena y gran parte de la escena en el taller, aparte de los créditos, fue hecho hoy, así que creo que está bien como para hacerlo hecho en solo 6 horas XD
Gracias Ject :D

Mexicanimator and graphic artist. Making stuff for Free Culture.
All the stuff I do is CC-By except when otherwise stated.

Age 31

2D Animator

VFS (2010-2012)

Joined on 3/6/07

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